Possible Scenes to Use:
- Krishna Comes - An Introduction: Here we learn about all the enemies that Krishna had. I thought it would be fun to create a story with completely different characters, but going through a similar situation. I thought about a girl moving to a new high school, with a gang of "mean girls" that already didn't like her for some reason (which I would need to come up with).
- Krishna Episode 2 - Vasudev Meets Yamuna: In this scene, Vasudev escapes with baby Krishna to protect him. It would be interesting to write a first-person scenario from Vasudev's point of view. He was in danger and was also probably so sad to be leaving his baby with someone else.
- Krishna Episode 3 - Durga Speaks to Kamsa: Kamsa hears of the birth of the 8th child and laughs when he finds out its a girl (it's not really, they were switched....but, you know). The girls ends up making a fool out of Kamsa and I would love to be able to make an empowering story out of this.
- Krishna Episode 12 - Krishna rides Hastin: Krishna rides the bull instead of killing it, teaching everyone a lesson of kindness. I would love to incorporate this theme into a story somehow
- Krishna Episode 13 - The Saviour of Dharma: Krishna learns about his destiny and all that this will require of him. A very emotional scene.
- Krishna Episode 14 - Akrur Invites Krishna: Krishna appears to be fearless about facing his destiny. But what would happen if he was secretly more afraid than he lead on?
Possible New Styles:
- Letter writing: this is a style I haven't tried yet, but want to. I have seen other people do it in their stories and they are always fun to read!
- Journal entry: similar to the letter, but more personal. This would be good for Episode 13 or 14!
- Script: lots of dialogue and an opportunity to explicitly state what emotions the characters are supposed to be feeling
Goals:
- Try something new
- Make it fun to read
- Create a story with good flow
- Start strong and finish strong the first time (not just after editing)
(I am leaning toward the idea of a letter or journal entry from Krishna!)
I was really excited to check out your 'Story Planning' assignment. I've done a few of these myself, but I was excited to pick up some tips from you! I have thought the same about the writing assignments- I always feel like I jump into it too fast and don't take ample time to plan. I love that you broke down this assignment into 'possible scenes' and 'possible styles'- this way, you're still flexible when it comes time to write the story! Also, I'm a huge goal-setter, so your 'goal' section really appealed to me. Great job!
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